Tuesday, November 9, 2021

The long fun run

 we were learning about how to describe our writing with some actives and our goal was to try not to use went because it was a boring word you can use i zoomed as a speed polite but you can't use the world went

i enjoyed doing this writing poem and it sounded like i had a really fun time doing fun run and putting it into my writing  and i also enjoyed M As writing when he was sharing his writing to room 1 writtiers to give us some example which it a really good start i really do like him doing that so it will refresh my mind on what i did in the past and i can use some additives in my writing  

i found it easy doing a slide of my colorful background and also posting this to my blog 

i found it hard that sometimes i forget to put my full stops most of the time  and sometimes i found it hard what to write and i choses my writing about the past  that's joyful and that includes friends family and i only choses writing from the past that have adjectives and describing words and that i found more challenging to post on my blog 

next time i could read back and cheek to putt the full stops 

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